my poem

i submitted a poem on poetry.com and they are going to put it into one of the poetry books they're publishing. not only that, they are giving me a chance to win a free ipod if i get 20 people to vote for my poem. i think i have five rite now and i know that i'll get 20 or more. if i get that free ipod, i'm going to sell it and save half of it and spend the rest. is hould save all of it, but i'm going to need some spending money wen i go home. it felt kind of good how my friends complimented my poem and stuff. i wonder though why don't some people give feedback on the not so good things. because the good stuff about my poem is already good so by giving me feedback it's kind of unneccessary because i'm always going to try to do good so that good stuff will be expected. however, some people should give feedback on what was not so good so that him or her could work on their no so good habits.