Peer Evaluation

It's kind of hard to write about my peer evaluation, because my peer evaluation didn't help me that much. Her name is Rebekah. I guess she didn't give me that much advice because my outline was good, according to what she said. She just told me to get rid of the personal pronouns. She encouraged me I guess. I evaluated Nathan's outline. Mrs. Greene's comments were more specific than mine. Mrs. G told Nathan that he needs to be more specific and gave him specific details in which he can use. That's something I need to start doing.